The second page to my music comic "Eyes on Me" based off of Angela Aki's version.
To clear up some stuff from the first page, the girl is basically singing her song, or her own story, and no one really hears it besides one guy. And yes the guy is a feminine-looking anime-type dude. I thoght that went more with the song since it was for a japanese video game... and those pretty boys usually attract more comic chicks anyways.
Here are the first part of the lyrics. The bolded parts are what this page is based off of. I will add the rest of the lyrics as i add more pages.
Whenever sang my songs On the stage, on my own Whenever said my words Wishing they would be heard I saw you smiling at me Was it real or just my fantasy Youd always be there in the corner Of this tiny little bar
love the drawing of the guy (even if he looks feminine tho i have seen more girly) and is that girl supose to be you? looks like ya sorta. also real sweet layout easy on the eyes and flows good. i personally like this page better than pg 1.
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Thank ya! I was hoping the guy wouldn't look too girly...but i didn't want him to have like a crew cut or anything. The girl's not supposed to be me, I was sorting thinking she was like Angela Aki (the singer). Glad ya like.
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That girl does not look like me!! Okay, well maybe just a little... just because of the ponytail... but that's it!!
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Yeah, it's definitley targeted towards more female audiences, which is sorta bad since 95% of my watchers are male. I'm hoping to even out the odds here.
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Thanks so much! i really tried to get that flowly feel across. Glad ya like!
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Glad ya like.
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Hey kids don't forget to drink your drugs and don't do milk!!!
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