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The second page to my music comic "Eyes on Me" based off of Angela Aki's version.

To clear up some stuff from the first page, the girl is basically singing her song, or her own story, and no one really hears it besides one guy.
And yes the guy is a feminine-looking anime-type dude. I thoght that went more with the song since it was for a japanese video game... and those pretty boys usually attract more comic chicks anyways. =D

Page 1: [link]
Page 3: [link]

You can listen to the song here: [link]

Here are the first part of the lyrics. The bolded parts are what this page is based off of. I will add the rest of the lyrics as i add more pages.

Whenever sang my songs
On the stage, on my own
Whenever said my words
Wishing they would be heard
I saw you smiling at me
Was it real or just my fantasy
You’d always be there in the corner
Of this tiny little bar
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~HolyMcshizlet:iconHolyMcshizlet: May 17, 2008, 9:34:08 PM
love the drawing of the guy (even if he looks feminine tho i have seen more girly) and is that girl supose to be you? looks like ya sorta. also real sweet layout easy on the eyes and flows good. i personally like this page better than pg 1.

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~Fatalist555:iconFatalist555: May 17, 2008, 9:41:27 PM
Thank ya! =D I was hoping the guy wouldn't look too girly...but i didn't want him to have like a crew cut or anything. The girl's not supposed to be me, I was sorting thinking she was like Angela Aki (the singer).
Glad ya like. :hug:

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~HolyMcshizlet:iconHolyMcshizlet: May 17, 2008, 9:50:11 PM
... does angela aki look like you?... lol jk no prob :manhug: <---hahaha

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~Fatalist555:iconFatalist555: May 17, 2008, 9:55:01 PM
That girl does not look like me!! Okay, well maybe just a little... just because of the ponytail... but that's it!!

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Spy Smasher: "You make me sick, just so you know."
Deadshot: "Yeah? Wait'll you see me NAKED.
~HolyMcshizlet:iconHolyMcshizlet: May 17, 2008, 10:09:32 PM
ok ok jeez dont get your panties all in a twist lol

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~oreopunk:iconoreopunk: May 18, 2008, 8:39:27 AM
I'm not the biggest on romatic comics but I really like your panel work very......letterbox esqe

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~Anicomicgeek:iconAnicomicgeek: May 18, 2008, 3:44:31 PM
Again, nice work. I like how the panels flow from one to the other. Good job.:)

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~Fatalist555:iconFatalist555: May 18, 2008, 3:53:00 PM
Yeah, it's definitley targeted towards more female audiences, which is sorta bad since 95% of my watchers are male. I'm hoping to even out the odds here. =D

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Spy Smasher: "You make me sick, just so you know."
Deadshot: "Yeah? Wait'll you see me NAKED.
~Fatalist555:iconFatalist555: May 18, 2008, 4:06:09 PM
Thanks so much! i really tried to get that flowly feel across. =D :hug: Glad ya like!

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Spy Smasher: "You make me sick, just so you know."
Deadshot: "Yeah? Wait'll you see me NAKED.
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